I'll be honest with you, I really like your ideas in this one. The whole still pose
in the rain, the music choice, really perfect together, had a great effect.
Now what I think you need to do next is learn how to do transitions. Instantly
flipping over to the next scene isn't too appealing. Study up on some other
youtubers' edits and see how they do their transitions, then apply what you've
learned to this WIP and see how it changes.

I would suggest looking at RM Slykuiper's channel to learn from his edits.

I'll subscribe to you FOR NOW and hopefully in the future you'll be putting out a lot of content that I can enjoy.

P.S. On a more personal opinion I just wanna say, take that stupid fucking latching elf off for edits, I hate holiday items outside of the holidays.

Thanks man Ill look into it after school gotta go to sleep, also I could do some fade to blacks for transitions idk Ill look into what you gave me

Just saw this in my feed as you uploaded it.
I like that you're using transitions now, but I have a few complaints.
At the start with the pose you fade to black to transition to the next
replay, but sometime you let it fade to fool black, while others you don't
I wouldn't do that, seems kind of half assed. Also to be honest when it
come to you switching from that post to those glimpses or replays I favor
a quick transition to be honest, and then later on in the video you fade to
black in between to replays and nothing happens for a few seconds, that
was bad. Instead of fading to black I would say add an extra keyframe
that just take the attention off the toris and looks off into the distance.

I'm not that good with keyframes, but here's an example.

Try downloading a program such as handbrake which will compress your file down to several mb

Will it make it quicker to upload vids also what do recommend for mac?

I've been using handbrake on mac for quite a while until last week cuz I got better internet. Really good tool and cut down a wait time from 50 minutes to 2 minutes.

Your general idea, as kohta said was great

However, there's two major things that can really improve your video. 1 is your velo. Search on youtube "how to velocity sync with time remap" and it should give you a lesson on that.
Next is CC. I don't really see much cc worked on, and a lot can be done to make video look better without the fog and rain (which is a bit too much imo). I highly suggest getting magic bullet looks, but if you cant, play around with the curves tool.

Magic bullet in general cost so much money so Ill go for playing around with lightinf effects/presets
In CC

There's quite a bit of black space tbh

Its still a wip thatll be gone probably the next wip or 2