Decided to try this again,
Gimme that good ol' cnc

nice manip, It would've been better if you had gotten more dms.

Thanks, I'm still new to manips so im trying to work with maneuvering uke around
Here's another that I finished a few days ago.
Got a little help from Tyzi with changing my second kick.
I'm also trying to figure out more ways to get dm's so bare with me.

Bumple Dumple

A couple of the steps and hits were a bit rough & jerky, especially that first grab, other than the it was good, the manip was average, the dms were good, but the pose could have been way better.

Here's my first real manip by myself.
I think I'm improving quite a bit.
I know my movements were pretty sudden and twitchy, but I'm still learning.
CnC and all that ^-^

sick replay, not much to dislike about it, the manip started a bit weak, but that was it.
nice work.

Another manip.
Anything I can improve on besides my Dm's?
I know I should have posed, but was too tired of this replay.

Aside from DMs, you could have improved your flow a bit, also you could have kept Uke a bit higher in the air.

everything was pretty pleasant for me up until the last two kicks that were pretty weak

after that, everything just didn't feel right

improve on your landings, or rather stopping built up momentum

still liked it very much 8/10