lol
if you want a realy quality one (which i always get lazy to do) here you go:
opener was blah blah blah you had a twitchy part of whatever was bad on it, i really liked those spins and shit though
first dm was nice but could've been better if you blah blah blah
transation between dms was really nice/bad or whatevs
2nd hit was great/suck blah blah blah
gj
well just use meaningful words with telling every good and bad part in every fucking frame and you get the ultilmate cnc, just like the ones you get when applying to ormo