hey, T0n0mi!
very solid spar both for your part and for satorika! I like how you connect your movements and how you are focused on the fight throughout the replay. I see a lot of potential on both sides, but I'm inclined to say that you still have a lot to improve, mainly because you seem to lose your balance most of the time when you try to attack.
there are some nitpicky improvement windows such as more powerful hits and getting out of positions such as in frame 890 in a smoother and more realistic way, but other than that you are going to the right direction!
you and satorika should consider joining RSO's discord server, let me know if you are interested (it's a toribash discord server for self-improvement at sparring btw)