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Obomination: The Rise Of The Ninja
Hello everybody and welcome to my replay thread!!! I need to get better in replay-making and to start it off I'll showcase some starter replays of my skills...
(Feel free to edit these replays in however way you want)
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Well...You've got the idea right.

Welcome to the world of replaymaking.

I can see what you're trying to do but, as of now, just looks like you flailing around happening to get DMs. These replays are lacking in fluidity, try to be more flowing and less grabby.
Hmm.. nice so far, just work on fluidity and less grabbing like brains said
If you would like, you could check out my replay thread (in my signature)
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