Endurance Onslaught 4
Original Post
rifle's magazine
welcome
haven't done anything tb related in a very long time, here's a quick one for now, sorry for my mediocrity
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Last edited by sbotmtwigrmiatstits; Nov 27, 2019 at 09:54 PM.
I like the movements in general, they're smooth and flowy which is good.

B U T... I dislike the way you decap you and the way you get uke into the position to decap him. From what I know about ukebashing (which isn't much) You should try to make hits pop out, like what you did with the first hit. The dm you did felt obstructed.

And the way you got him there felt lazy.


Also at 325 you ghosted


I think you just rushed at the end tbh.


I look forward to seeing what you make next.

man im lazy
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like, REALLY lazy
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Last edited by sbotmtwigrmiatstits; Mar 23, 2020 at 12:56 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
good movement, but lazy booms, u deen work on it 80/10
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