I like it, its just the eyes are...yellow. and the face is too big, the letters are too big. I really like hanz0's approach. Try more of that, or if you feel it, do what you feel, MaddMaxx10.
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Im liking it so far, but ya its too blurred so you cant see the mist. Also a tip for all, have blood running down the letters but not too much or else it will look like someone jerked and bled :P
Haha, alright. I'll be working a bit on the eyes too, make 'em more... demon-y? And the mist is the major 'problem' right now.