Pink elf girl in white mask
WORK IN PROGRESS
Please rate from 1 to 10 (idea, style, execution).
For example: Idea:1, Style:2, Execution:3
Programs: ArtRage 4, Photoshop CS5
Size: 1042x512
Spent: around 2 hour

the overall shape of the head looks small

the finished product is messy and it confuses me to the point where i don't know if you're going for a cartoony look or a realism look.

Thx, Chab. It will be 70% cartoony and 30% realism. Any way it's WIP. Need to do a lot of work here for get epic head. (Sorr for bad English)

its really weird because the shading and art content is fucking perfect.

but the layout is a lil wack, Id try to re work how the head is mapped/ layed out

but other then that, the chin line is a lil weird

super nice tho

I like it, but i am bothered about the fact that the ear is the same color as the hair. Is that a mistake or a choice of design?

i like this but i think the hair is too bright my eyes
i recommend lowering the brightnes

Too many thick dark lines on the edges of the hair, it looks like a clumped up mess, i'd recommend trying to make it thinner.
Especially on the mask, looks very dirty.

i disagree the thick black lines are done like that to make it pop make it look more 3d the mask looks great

Very lovely work. Only thing I would advise you is to never use the colour black. Always substitute a warm or cold dark. It will 100% improve your future work. Good luck.