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TiffiTrony Nub replais
Heyyyyy Skip to last page for better replays(maybe)
Please give me criticism so i can improve!
If you think i did something wrong and you can fix it:
Post the replays with the same name i gave it but add a "edit Yourname"
Example: "Tifftron - The Ocean edit lovelynoob"
Thanks for taking the time to read through this
i hope you like what you see X)))
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Tifftron - The Ocean.rpl (222.4 KB, 19 views)
'salright. Opener was ok. it was a bit boring considering you barely moved at all in mid air though. The split looked a bit underwhelming and the way you kicked uke looked pretty bad. Decap was ok but you smashed uke's torso to your head making it look sloppy. YOu pretty much lost all momentum before the final kick making it look forced. Wrist dm didn't help either.

Keep working. Polish your replays when you feel it's needed. The edit button is always there you know.
|Opener by Xioi|#KillTheScootCork|
|Replays|
"Cool delfin med solglajjor" -Larfen
New repla<y
after mack just rekt me i made an new replay with a bit help of Betanub(alphan00b)
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Tifftron - FLASHBACK.rpl (226.2 KB, 12 views)
nice opener
faster spin would have been nice and you could have gotten in a way better position to jump at a better angle because that brought u way too close and im surprised the split worked

follow up into the next hit was super boring and literally predictable
at frame 90 you could have tried to spin really fast and get a quick glute split or something

pretty nice just try to be more creative and faster i guess
baha
Replay
Idk why i am uploading this, its worse than shi, BUT i promise 3-2 good replays coming this, or next week!
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GivingUpIsUnhealthy.rpl (102.0 KB, 7 views)