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still the render is pretty much at the center. and the background is really empty.
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Originally Posted by LWafflez View Post
I think all those sigs are fine apart from the centered focal. You could work on flow a bit too.

Look up ways to make flow and the rule of thirds.

Originally Posted by aerox21 View Post
still the render is pretty much at the center. and the background is really empty.

Thank you for your c&c guys, I'll try to improve on those part.
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Last edited by iNoTo; Feb 10, 2011 at 04:30 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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The first one seems way too cluttered. Simplicity can work as well. You should practice that so you can find a balance between both.
Also it doesn't have depth, much flow, or good lighting.
When you want depth, work with layers, overlays, and opacity. And flow is basically everything going one way and corresponding perfectly.
And lighting is pretty basic, create the light source from the point the light should be coming from.
Make this intense, but not so much it looks over contrasted.

The second one is better, but pretty much the same.

Also wip
Doxxy,you might seriously want to make the edge of the eyes/eyebrow-area clearer. Since i didn't see it at first. also is it somekind of skeletor mage?


iNoTo, The first one has alittlebit of flow but like doxxy said it lacks many much other stuff. the second one still has a centered render. but if we get over it. I don't see much flow in it.
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Looks cool but I find it hard to picture a face in it.
I try to give my Tribals faces, works better ingame to be honest :B

Mapping will fudge up a lot on the bottom though..
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looks like a sad clown lol
Last edited by micho; Feb 11, 2011 at 02:21 PM.

Hey guys what you think of this head?
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Is it still a wip right?
Its blurry a little, especially on the sides
Back is kind of empty and repatitive
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