I like the feel of the video, it's quite nice. It is a little slow I think, I reckon a little more sync would do the trick. Also, the sync if i am correct was a little off on some of the hits, but other than that i quite like it. Good one
I cant really tell the difference between the first one and the second, maybe the song suits the replay better on the 2nd one.
Well, can be better in the future, goodluck dude.