text at the start (letter) was weird and didn't fit in, would have changed it or not have added it at all. love edits with music like this. i really liked the first 3 sync points (first 3 piano notes), but the on the 4th point, the keyframe goes to shit and you see the scope way too fast and it's really sharp and looks gross. would have been 100 times better if it were more smooth, or transitioned better. after watching, i'm pretty sure every shot does that, where the scope pops up really quickly and looks strange. smooth out your keyframing plssssss. transition @ 0:25 was bad, in-fact, i wasn't a fan of too much after 0:25.
either way, it wasn't bad, i liked the cc, keep going, work on keyframing, etc.