Pretty good shading, but blech on the color.
It looks like you drew it in grayscale and just used a recolor setting.
It makes the head very bland.
Some stuff you could do:
Make teeth white
Eyes red
hair brown/yellow
Keep the bottom band right above the hair gray
And then use some blue and a dash of red around the main part of the mask for a nebula look, maybe. After all, elves are supposed to be magical and stuff right? So sparkly even, or glow. Shiner.
Your texture is a good reproduction of the source, but I think you should take some liberties to make it more toribash friendly.
But color aside, really great head that's different from most I see.
EDIT: also, Elfen in german, elVen in english.
Last edited by DarkJak; May 25, 2010 at 07:42 AM.