So, yeah, got this beginning, for one of my replays, ignore everything past the first DM, the rest is to be edited.

It was stiff and lacked speed, but I enjoyed the creative way of dm-ing the torso 5/10

Thanks Muur, I know I'm just now finally actually making an effort in singleplayer. I used to not, but now I am really attempting something. Anyway, got another one, still in active stages of being edited. It's really, really stiff, and the ending needs a lot of work. But... It's better than my previous one.