It's not that good, but the only reason I made this is because it is so fun to make videos =D

I don't have much experience and I'm yet to learn some of the basic things of Toribash, so don't go hard on me please ;)
EDIT Okay here is the final version. C&C would be awesome...

Well i didnt write a critism before and i dont watch much videos,but in my opinion there is too much slowmotion

I know, but that is what I was aiming for, because every toribash video I watch its just too damn fast.

Only half as slOw as now would be good i think?!

Ok.
1st if you don't have good and clean replays it will be hard to get a nice and sync video.
Then the camera was to close,the quality was not the best, effects were okay.
But like you said you are just starting at this so is ok.
overall 3/10
But if you want to get some replays to get on you're video you should do it here.
http://forum.toribash.com/forumdisplay.php?f=369

Effects are awesome i really like it, but needs some better replays. Good work so far.

If you want a slow video, use slow music.
Plus, there's too many effects, I can't see whats happening half the time.

too many effects, save some time your the replays and music is off for how slow the vid was

Yes I've realized the video was bad after I watched it xD
But I'll try to correct those mistakes in the future =P.

Can you record with shaders?
Also try to not add in too many effects and if there are many effects try to make it clearly visible to see what is happening.
Also try to add in some cooler effects with adobe after effects or something the programm is called it would make it cool! I will try it too so yeah

But video was still good so i give it a 7/10