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[art] Cait.
Randomness from fate (: hi everyone.


Been playing LoL for a while, fell in love with caitlyn.
wanted to do a vector of her in a self created skin.



because it would look good on her.
+rep for not showing any skin. You can tell a guy didn't make it. /overgeneralizing

I like it though. nice colors and all. I'd personally round the chin just a tad. and the foot on the right side of the picture seems to have a black dot out of place. I would've liked to see another layer of highlights. on the clothing especially. gorgeous hair! nice accessories. Pretty dang good proportions too. And of course it's wonderful! draw in a floor too. So she's standing somewhere. I'm digging this though. nice job! (of course.)
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lovely shaped body from the head to hips, then the legs are like sticks.
would love to see you put her in a pair of fitting pants with the same effort you put into the jacket. you got lazy :P
nice curves around the calves, theyr looking a bit straight
a bit of a curve on the jacket from her bum, seems to pinch inwards a bit, makes the jacket look less fitted than the rest of it
boobies are a bit low, but she's a tall skinny girl, so it makes sense i guess.
a bit of feathering on the hat like you did on the edges, again, lazy :P

a nice vector overall, face hair and majority of the jacket are looking good.
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Waist up -> awesome
Waist down -> meh

Did you get bored when you hit the pants or something?
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yes. yes. (: i got super bored with the legs.

and half of it is referring to the original uniform.
not much i can do lol. im working on a background and gun atm.
Leave the background indistinct
gun would be cool
Originally Posted by Fate View Post
and half of it is referring to the original uniform.
not much i can do lol.

so do it yourself, lazy :|
-=Art is never finished, only abandoned=-
Legs could have used a little bit more feminism, at least in the pose.
Headband on the "hat" shouldn't cover the mouth, but under the chin.
Loving the upper body though, nice proportions.
She kinda looks like she isn't wearing a bra, but whatever, bra's are over rated anyway.

So:
-
Legs
Pose of the lower body
Hatband over mouth

+
Pose of the upper body
Execution of the hair and upper body
Overall concept
Fr3styL . Improving by Improvising
I'm an artist.
Originally Posted by AlphasoniK View Post
Legs could have used a little bit more feminism, at least in the pose.
Headband on the "hat" shouldn't cover the mouth, but under the chin.
Loving the upper body though, nice proportions.
She kinda looks like she isn't wearing a bra, but whatever, bra's are over rated anyway.

So:
-
Legs
Pose of the lower body
Hatband over mouth

+
Pose of the upper body
Execution of the hair and upper body
Overall concept


Yeah, that headband is supposed to go under the chin, not over the mouth.
It just looks weird like that ..
And when you move the headband under her chin, you can get started on her mouth/lips.
The legs look really stiff as well, and doesn't go with the pose of the upper body.

;)

Looking good so far.
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