ok hmm... you need to work on sync. a lot. you had slow replays to fast paced music (what is this i don't even?)

Pretty good for a first try 6/10.

Sync was bad, replays were slow and simple, rock songs dont really fit unless you know how to make them fit. Spend more time on a video rather than editing it for a few minutes/hours.

Sometimes the action is all the way on the edge.
Constantly spinning camera DOES NOT capture good angles.
Sometimes the characters only take up 10% of the screen.

You should leave credit for the music somehow.

if it is your first time, okay, needs better syncing music once again doesnt fit 5/10

too much slow motion need more camera shake music is not bad realy good for your first try.

Its his THIRD time he makes a toribash video dont know how you people came up with first time tze...

Also i didnt hate so much on it it is cool not too many effects doesnt have sync but whats the matter,
Try to choose an different song though also replays were cool.

but since it is your third video, 6/10