good editing overall
as usual it was overdone in a few sections, struggled to see what was going on, but it was mostly watchable. with the darker shaders and dark texture schemes, you need to watch out for over-editing them.
thought the slow-mo from 0:06 went on for a bit long, partially the songs fault and partially yours, not sure what you could do to remedy that tho, various options come to mind, but none of them really great
by far your best though.