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Originally Posted by Nagato9757 View Post

Let's play a little game

From now on, i will be naming replays from lyrics of songs
You have to guess the songs and the band
First person to get it right earns 10 tc

Only thing you have to do is enter valid cnc (me to judge)

Lets start with the replay in the op

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Last edited by Nagato; Jun 12, 2016 at 12:45 PM.
this is pretty good for your first replay in almost a month
pretty ok opener. i like how you didn't just do the ordinary where you just extend your hip for a spin and instead used your hand
i don't know why but i really love the hip dm.
great punch. maybe could've been a boom if you got a grab
really good hook. also could've been a boom
last kick was pretty good
8/10 good job
Thanks mate


Let's play a little game

From now on, i will be naming replays from lyrics of songs
You have to guess the songs and the band
First person to get it right earns 10 tc

Only thing you have to do is enter valid cnc (me to judge)

Lets start with the replay in the op
Last edited by Nagato; Jan 31, 2016 at 08:05 PM.
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bmth - alligator blood

neato replayo!

work on flow in movements

might edit this with more in-depth analysis but i can't think of anything to say that bquadz hasn't already said
Last edited by hood; Jan 31, 2016 at 08:53 PM.
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Originally Posted by hood View Post
bmth - alligator blood

neato replayo!

work on flow in movements

might edit this with more in-depth analysis but i can't think of anything to say that bquadz hasn't already said

woo!
oki sending tc ;)
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good replay overall just got sloppy towards the end of the manip,
after you started the hits it feels as if you forced them to start happening, try biding out your time and waiting for the correct moment to start your hits next time,
over all you are improving so keep it up
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The manip was pretty bad, you let uke hit you too many times. The opener was pretty sloppy. The first DM's kick lacked alot of pwer, making it look like you just opened a bottle, your foot being the bottle opener whilst uke's head being the cap of said bottle. Your wrists were relaxed in the beginning which allowed them to flop about, making your opener look worse than it already does.

The pose was ok
Hey, NagatoNumbers. C^:

Let's play a game of Russian Roulette:
Opener was A-Okay.
Hip kick was fine, I guess.
Punch could've got more DMs-nevertheless a boom.
Nicely ghosted ankle, but it didn't have much DMs.
Left leg kick was smooth, but not much DMs.
Now, if only you could use some more speed..
5.2/10

8:18:
Opener was pretty fitting.
Transition to first contact was really nice, I like it.
1st kick to raise Uke was finely knitted.
2nd manip hit after that was slick as well, liked it.
Wish you could've aimed the contracting knee and made it contact. You'll know why..
3rd manip hit after that where you pretty much launched yourself towards Uke and sucked all the space you can do to make a better manip hit with it. Disappointed with that one.
Decap was fine, but you didn't extend the leg much and just contracted it halfway, which was realllly bad.
Crotch kick could've at least gotten you a boom.
4.7/10
Thanks everyone but mastertech

And someone that uses the /10 system propperly. Cheers

I added a cover for my thread, but expect no replays for a week
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