first vault:
-was a toe jump, something that imo is gross in pk
-the little step off thing you did on that vault looked kinda nice though
second vault:
-again a toe jump
-it looked awkward because you were getting to close to the vault and had to cut your step off half way
the first roll
-the roll did what its supposed to do, witch is keep your momentum although it could have been better imo
-it was a little but jolty when you jammed your hand into the ground to get the momentum you needed for the jump, this could have been avoided if you had a better roll
the jump fallowing the roll
-your movement in the jump was pretty good, not much else to say
the slide
-the slide was meh, the movement wasn't great
-the transition off the slide was good
the stairs
-you did a good job of keeping momentum on the stairs but both jumps were toe jumps :'c
-the run at the top of the stairs looked very unnatural
the gap
-you missed out on a good opportunity to wall run there, witch would have looked much nicer than what u ended up doing.
-other than that the gap looked pretty messy
the next gap
-your kong was pretty gross
-you did a good job of keeping momentum again
-the landing on the other side was gross and messy
the bars
- you did alright on the bars but at the start of the bars you did some really weird natural flip things that were pretty gross
-the landing on the other platform was pretty good although you did loose pretty much all your momentum
the tiktaks
-the run leading up to the tiktaks was not great
-the jump off the first tiktak was pretty good and gave a fair bit of power
-your vault onto the platform with cylinders was pretty good aside from that fact that it was a toe jump
the cylinders
-your run on the cylinders was pretty messy although it got cleaner as you went
the ending
-imo was a bit more flashy than it needed to be but over was pretty good, corks weren't great.
over all a score of 6.7/10
i hope to see some new stuff in future as your replay showed promise, just keep playing and keep improving.
-was a toe jump, something that imo is gross in pk
-the little step off thing you did on that vault looked kinda nice though
second vault:
-again a toe jump
-it looked awkward because you were getting to close to the vault and had to cut your step off half way
the first roll
-the roll did what its supposed to do, witch is keep your momentum although it could have been better imo
-it was a little but jolty when you jammed your hand into the ground to get the momentum you needed for the jump, this could have been avoided if you had a better roll
the jump fallowing the roll
-your movement in the jump was pretty good, not much else to say
the slide
-the slide was meh, the movement wasn't great
-the transition off the slide was good
the stairs
-you did a good job of keeping momentum on the stairs but both jumps were toe jumps :'c
-the run at the top of the stairs looked very unnatural
the gap
-you missed out on a good opportunity to wall run there, witch would have looked much nicer than what u ended up doing.
-other than that the gap looked pretty messy
the next gap
-your kong was pretty gross
-you did a good job of keeping momentum again
-the landing on the other side was gross and messy
the bars
- you did alright on the bars but at the start of the bars you did some really weird natural flip things that were pretty gross
-the landing on the other platform was pretty good although you did loose pretty much all your momentum
the tiktaks
-the run leading up to the tiktaks was not great
-the jump off the first tiktak was pretty good and gave a fair bit of power
-your vault onto the platform with cylinders was pretty good aside from that fact that it was a toe jump
the cylinders
-your run on the cylinders was pretty messy although it got cleaner as you went
the ending
-imo was a bit more flashy than it needed to be but over was pretty good, corks weren't great.
over all a score of 6.7/10
i hope to see some new stuff in future as your replay showed promise, just keep playing and keep improving.
