Decent opener, but it really wasn't anything special. I like double knees though and you nailed that part. The second kick wasn't really a kick as much as a contraction, but it got a decent boom. Try to work on being less stiff, and as combat said, work more on the presentation and less on the bloody aspect of toribash. It's not great, but it's not bad either.
Oh, and when you pose, try not to do the "fully extended hips and knees, half contracted elbows look". It's really generic (and pretty cliché for newer replaymakers) and as you progress, you'll be wondering why you did it XD
In my opinion, a pose like this is much more attractive (and it really only took about 3 minutes of editing). It looks much more relax and less forced. Really, it just looks more badass. I hope you don't mind.
Last edited by SkyWhale; Jan 29, 2015 at 05:40 AM.