Definitely better, still too thick though. A thick black line makes it look more like it was carved with a hacksaw instead of being cracked by blunt force, so you gotta be a bit more subtle than that, oddly enough (in other words, THINNER LINE). Remember that cracks don't actually remove any material, they just split it apart, like freshly broken rocks that you can put together near-seamlessly. I'm sure we've all tried that. :v
new crack
Much better, though now the highlights at the edge of the crack seem a bit too dramatic for the size of it. Besides that, though, nice!
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love the ice golem idea i'm totally doing that, great suggestion also background or no background if background like what?
^ isnt that like stealing? i'm genuinely asking because idk it just doesnt feel right ya know? also i dont think i could do that any justice im not nearly good enough to do that xD
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