please cnc and tell me things to improve
wip1 http://i.imgur.com/LxLpaZ2.jpg
wip2 http://i.imgur.com/RZDnqdD.png
the face will be a little bit better shown in the future
this is for the hotm3 event

Yeah, make them watchable.

Thanks.

I don't even really know what I'm looking at. I basically just see a background colour with veeeeery faint airbrushing. Make darker marks, we can't tell anything from these wips.

!Update!
made face a little bit more noticeable and added the strings to make it feel like a mask

that's a nice pink smudgy block u got going on there

ikr

What am I looking at right now?

Have you tried turning the opacity of your brush higher?

i will need to use darker colors the opacity was at 100%

There's no way the opacity is at 100% when your brush looks like that.
Have you tried turning the layer opacity higher?

Draw the face like you're trying to watermark it.