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Originally Posted by thedevill View Post
nice, her tits looks saggy due ._.

no one cares
anyway her arm is in a really awk and ugly position
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

Originally Posted by thedevill View Post
nice, her tits looks saggy due ._.

Originally Posted by Tyzi View Post
no one cares
anyway her arm is in a really awk and ugly position


you say they're saggy, I say they're voluptuous...

Anyways tyzi, which arm are you talking about? the one shes leaning on?
her right arm specifically, but the whole position just seems a bit awk :xx
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
I'm Brazilian, i'm alredy fucked every day i wake up

she may need to visit a hospital.
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Originally Posted by NinjaVodou View Post

Arm


/constructive criticism
Yeah, there seems to be some proportional issues with the arms.
The other arm also has this issue, though less obvious.
Also, the shading in the hands make them look a bit flat.
Especially the right one (pointing).
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
well uh, may have twisted it the wrong way? no biggie shes limber and uh seductive.... she will live. on a serious note, thanks for pointing it out but said part is there is only so much i can go back and fix in gimp/photoshop
I know what you mean,
it's not an easy fix.

Also, the fingernails are too dark?
The past makes you wanna die out of regret, and future makes you depressed out of anxiety. So by elimination, the present is likely the happiest time.
a bit too, dark, hands are rough. I may fix it if i have the heart to do more postwork.
This is great, but there are some issues with the consistency of the lighting on her upper body. It seems to be a bit paler than her head, which makes it stand out. That may have been intentional, as it is the closest thing to the lamp other than the couch, but if that is the case, the desk does not have correct lighting.
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Originally Posted by NinjaVodou;697[SPOILER="Arm"
2115][/SPOILER] she may need to visit a hospital.

When i looked closer at this picture, it seems like her hand is just floating above the couch. You should add shadow to the couch to make it seem like she were actually leaning on her left hand.
Last edited by keoni109; Dec 25, 2013 at 06:42 AM. Reason: <24 hour edit/bump
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