less flat white toris on top of flat white backgrounds/objects + less ridiculously high contrast colors


it looks like you've been focusing more on editing alongside showcasing replays than last time i've checked one of your videos, which is good. i'd have liked to see more sync involve the hits of the replays, rather than velo changing for seemingly no reason (which takes away from 'showcasing replays') but i have been saying that for years ....



you had a cool idea at :44 with the wings, but something about how it was just slapped on then disappears over 1 frame makes it look cheesy-er than just not doing it at all. it's way more effort than it needs to be doing those kinds of things in sony vegas (if you're still using that) where i don't quite have the solution myself on how to make it look better, but i'm sure the inspiration was drawn from somewhere that you could get an idea on how to execute this kinda stuff.


i actually think 2:33 did a good enough job building up the clip that is supposed to come after, but it seemed to be for nothing since you didnt do anything with the "bwoomm" which just seemed lazy.


the freecam in the video you posted right before this one was actually really good compared to this one.. and it makes me want to think that you know that it's generally better to keep your subject in the center of the shot but just got lazy freecamming all these parkour replays.


still lots of improvement that i would have liked to have seen by now. im seeing lots of ideas that just dont look executed very well and it makes it hard to sit through 4 minutes of this


hopefully that's helpful