Work in progress, C&C appreciated. What should I add to make it more interesting?

Wanted to make something quick and simple, since I had a lot of leftover paint on my palette.

still waiting Ezeth with yellow piss name

I don't really contribute much to the community, I dont even play Toribash, so I doubt that is going to happen anytime soon.

More arts

Already sold for 260$

some new arts, working on a Nordic landscape painting now.
Its probably going to be my last painting in a while, seeing as school has started up again.

Completed this Norwegian Coastline painting.




I am working on this:



but I don't really like it, it got a little bit too abstract for my taste. What do you guys think?
I wanted it to portray a person leaving the comforts of his home in to a dangerous unstable world.

I won't upload anymore art to the forums, so if you want to follow my progress you can follow me on instagram: https://www.instagram.com/heggyart/
Reason being that I already have enough places I upload my art, and this forum is pretty dead.

your latest piece looks great to me. def following to see more on insta

ezeth your art is legendary i remember i wanted my tori to look like yours I believe you deserve piss name

"but I don't really like it, it got a little bit too abstract for my taste. What do you guys think?"

I believe a more focused approach towards the colorscheme of the piece would definitely uplift the appreciation and composition contrast of it as a whole, I love the -albeit to me- clear visualization of the dispersing and emancipation from the core approaching the unkown (as a completely new planet so to speak), maybe the camera didn't do it justice but I believe what seems to muddy the clarity of the picture is the dimness or general lack of vibrancy

Thanks for that

I continued for a couple of hours, and redeemed it a little bit, but its still a muddy mess, which is what oilpaint looks like when you overwork it.


It shows how important proper pre-planning and blocking in the shapes beforehand is, and I definitely learned a lesson. The camera didnt help either, I think I will just write it off as a failed experiment and move on.