I really liked the aggressive style of the opener, good job there. The set up to the kick was decent, but I would prefer that you didn't have your arms to close together when going for the grab.
As you can see on frame 650 your arms are rather stiff, and bunched up together. Try relaxing a pec and the arm or something to get a more realistic representation of your grab so it will look a lot sweeter.
Decap was good, but I was never a fan of shin kicks, always ended up too messy for me.
the kicks were nice as well. I particularly like the chest block kick, but you should have tried to get a crotch dm in there afterwards, that would have been great.
pose was meh, you can do better :P
overall its pretty decent, strong points and a few weak points. I like your style though, reminds me of war_hero's in a way, but yeah work on your transitions and booms and good luck with your future replays. o7