Toribash
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Attempted Madmans and a few decaps
Im ateempting to make some madmans, and I need some help on the ripping part.
Can someone give me some pointers? thanks!!
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C&C and help with ripping apart peices is greatly appreciated!!!
Attached Files
mini-madman.rpl (68.8 KB, 23 views)
attempted headpass.rpl (63.0 KB, 16 views)
fully manual split.rpl (60.1 KB, 12 views)
awseome relax all decap.rpl (85.4 KB, 17 views)
he got tired of bullcrap....rpl (52.1 KB, 11 views)
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ok Dj.
I am going to be truthful.

for a 3d dan they are some of the worst replays I have evr seen in my entire life of Tb.

1. the are incredibly stiff.
2. you always used grab.
3. you Dm'd yourslef.
4.most of your attacks miss.after my attacks miss I Edit it.
5.you Dm'd hardly anything.
6.there was no skill and style just messy random grabs.


if you can fix those thing I will be very impressed.

Im just being truthful thoa.I'm a strict replay lurker so dont be down.
good day
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dude, im LEARNING how to do it. not an expert....yet
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Thats why he reviewed the replays and gave you critique. Its supposed to help you. By making some pointers to follow then you can improve in replay making. Its hard getting such comments actually. As for the replays, they were stiff and some had self DMs.
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Originally Posted by KronosLord View Post
ok Dj.
I am going to be truthful.

for a 3d dan they are some of the worst replays I have evr seen in my entire life of Tb.

1. the are incredibly stiff.
2. you always used grab.
3. you Dm'd yourslef.
4.most of your attacks miss.after my attacks miss I Edit it.
5.you Dm'd hardly anything.
6.there was no skill and style just messy random grabs.


if you can fix those thing I will be very impressed.

Im just being truthful thoa.I'm a strict replay lurker so dont be down.
good day

trust me he is

also i have seen worse but not by much.

yeah, right now don't try and get too much too soon.

just try and use less grab (you still can grab just use less) then i would reccomend after every DM relax all and keep going, this should make sure that you make it look relaxed.