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C&C please.

its nice, but in my opinion its too much shades

Can you post some ideas? ;s
Constructives comments please...

I like it, but I think it's too blurry. Also, it lacks "flashiness" to me. Try using some brighter colors on the legs.

Yes.
There's too much blur and it look unrealistic because the brush that you use is pretty big
Try using a small brush so you can fit more details in.

The big lines make it look a bit sloppy to be honest.
It is to random for my taste.

Try practicing on head textures, I'll send you a head you can practice with.

Not bad, try and make the shadows fade out more, so that the lines are less visible.

its a pretty good set, make the head look more like the set, if it does can u post a pic of the head?

Needs more details, there's too much shading in it, and it's too blurry.
But it's good.

Listen here.
The stroke lines are to big.
Lines on the ankles,dont do them,
Add more platinum,quicksilver,vulcan.
Put some white(or maybe a bit light-gray) lines as overlay.
Make the screens in photoshop or gimp,to have better quality on each screen.
6/10.
P.S.
Paint.net sucks banana cream pie with squirty condoms on it...uh...what did i just write ?