UPDATE:


Detailed C&C's and suggestions please.

It looks very nice, but blurry. That's really all I can think of that you could change.

9/10 so far.

i think its a pretty awesome start! i especially the back. i expect something more in the front.

I haven't used the blur tool at all. :/

It's just because I put so many grey colours in. it went like >Black>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>tiny tiny tiny bit ligher>White.

Try adding some sense to it :P rather than "some metal shapes there" you can go "breathing system here, Mask there, glass here"

take this helmet for an example

http://img.dailymail.co.uk/i/pix/200...ET_468x608.jpg

9.9\10