Here's My First Replay....
Feel Free To Comment On It!
ARMIN1's first replay.rpl

Well thats alot less than perfect. first of all SYMMETRY! dont use it, too boring and slow.

also you couldve easily got a decap and a split.

next grab! dont grab for too long, it almost never looks good.

and you didnt even use relax, use it.

1/10

some tips:
look around the forums and watch the 'premier' replay maker's replays. i recommend
Dragenon, Me (RayA75), Sprytryne, Pulse, Marco, and Larfen. Also watch some replays that are already in replay folder. try to imitate the speed, style, finesse and destruction of those people.

Use relax, but don't over use it.when something isnt moving or not in use, relax it.

Get your own style, add little touches to your movements to help make it unique

LONG LIVE GOOD REPLAYS.

You sir, are overrating yourself. And you forgot Splinter & Rutz.

Like Ray said, symmetry is bad. Listen to Ray if you want to get your ass kicked by criticism. Now then considering it's your first replay, the destruction isn't too bad. I know my first replay barely got an arm. Your replay is extremely stiff overall. You can fix this by changing your joints to relax when you don't need them for anything. Also, using grab to dismember a joint is frowned upon. Always try to get the dismember without grab.

yeah lol i was.
also dont forget the pose.
Make sure you dont fall over, and I like to see them standing

Thanks 4 the Comments.

So i need to be more relaxed and less stiff, and also stop using symmetry.
at the end i need to add a standing pose.

but is there anyway to save some moves to use them for another replay or maybe fix them in another replay? or i need to memorize my previous moves?

how about this one?
this time my opponent moves too.

Replay removed. See Rule 1. ~Tamer0

hey im gonna rate the first one
it was stiff, symetricall but considering u started this month ur good 4
a begginer

watch some different replays from other ppl and u might get some ideas
3/10

i reckon if u tryed ur hardest u could do somethin like this
this took me about 2 mins

Nice Edit.
so what do you think about my 2nd replay

its multiplayer.theres a sub forum for that.

standing is easier than you think, i like to do it with both shoulders relaxed, chest on hold but rotated a little, contracted neck, crontracted one glute and extended other glute, tilted lumbar, contracted abs.and relax the feet till its flat on te ground then hold them.if you would like for me to post a replay, just tell me.

RayA75 is very strict when it comes to symmetry, he'll kick your ass with criticism if you use it. Also, don't start with a noob clap.