hey, this is my first attempt at this sort of thing and i couldnt find anywhere for this sort of replay to go, so here it is, my headpass
feel free to post other headpasses and such :P

both uke's and tori's movements were very stiff, slow and boring. uke or tori only moved at a given time and that in conjunction with the first problem makes for bad quality. you were also hesitant to throw alot.
but its good that ur trying those kinds of replays so early.
3/10

thanks for the advice only orange belt =/ but yh thanks

hm i think thats pretty good for an orange belt. Well done!

thanks, if u want to edit it feel free to and make it better

hmmm its not cool!
because hold stile and head touch the ground
3\10

hmmmm, i thinks ur being a bit harsh :/

for orange belt is great work o.o

Its ok actually its fast but you need to grab alot less for a head pass i would say about 6/10 maybe 7.

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What he said.

There was too much grabbing, and the head touched the floor too many times (in my opinion)

But very nice if you are new! 6/10

Keep it up.