The tori's are well rendered but the models need a bit of work.
Axes: to jagged, and I don't mean realistically jagged. And some of the normals are screwed up, your see parts of black. Plus there is Way to much reflection on them.
The car: It's not smooth enough, I see from the second to third car you added subsurf, but the subsurf level either isn't high enough, or you haven't set smooth. There also is that awful gaping black whole at the bottom part that is as big as tori's head, for that it's either you deleted the vertices there or once again the normals are screwed up. also, the second render compared to the first isn't as sharp, the car looks a little weaker in colour
Sorry dae, but I'd say 5.5/10
Last edited by SecondSoul; Jul 20, 2010 at 06:28 PM.