Here are some lyrics I made for a couple of songs. They are obviously unfinished and I would like to see what you people can come up with to make them better. They have no genre so it can be rap or rock or anything else.

"Imma Geek"

Imma Geek
Imma Geek
So Unique
Suck my dick

If you ever mess with me, I won't do shit.
Cause I'm a geek
and Geeks get hit....


"Spellbound"

If you've ever been under a spell
Please feel free to tell
All I want to do is
make this song sell.
When a wizard cast a spell on me
around me the world fell
I felt like dying
and I just wanted to yell...

I like the beginning of Imma Geek but the rest just makes my brain hurt.. o_o

rhymes are too tacky.

"Go to Hell!" maybe?

Spellbound is going a weird direction, anyways spent like 5 minutes conjuring this up, not much better, but it does extend the content of the lyrics a lot and is stretched out into a story.

"Spellbound"

Lightning and Thunder
There stood the wizard
Chanting unknown words
He held his staff high
Energy Unheard
Ground started to fly.

The Wizard
casted a spell on me
I'm spellbound
Driven to insanity
Now insane
Someone please help me.

I was under a spell
that has driven me mad
Around me the world fell
I screamed out and yelled



Kryo, having some rhymes makes it look like you know what you are doing, other than being a fairy and writing pseudopoetry and by that I mean slam poetry.

suck my dick and unique dont rhyme and and Geeks get hit mess's up the song a little but its your song

It's hard to write lyrics when you don't have a song or beat to sing/rap them over. Because you can have crazy uneven phrases but still make it work in the song, you know?
like
- - dah dah doo dedah doo dah deedle -
- - - dah - de - doo - - - - - -
- - - dah do dedah-ah do deedle -
- - - dah - de - doo - - - - - -
where - is a beat

well that's right , any reff for this song ?

na sorry. no beat. I can make one but It would be pointless.