I made this early, tell me what you think

I'm not exactly a critic, but this is definitely a good replay. I enjoyed how many dismemberments there were. 8/10

Thanks, but i think was not too smooth, i used to much force xD
Thanks for your reply.
Please, reply if you think i need to improve on something

I did.'t like it very much at all. You are right. It's not smooth. You need style. don't try to dm by just contracting your knee. It look retarded. When make a madmen Try to make it below 800 frames. try using -30 gravity. Everytime you touch uke try to make a dm. Don't grab so much. Try relax more. Your movements are ugly. your pose was awful. Try landing on your feet. Also try making more distant. 250 is a good distance. You need alot of work. 2/10 Theres alot more flaws in yuor replay. this is only a few.

hmmf... I don't like -9.82 gravity...Try to use -30.00.
ur replay is quite 5/10 but u can make it better... here is my edit of ur replay...(in my oppinion is a bad replay....but is better that urs(I think)).
PS: I did this EDIT in 2 minutes...

I know, i'm beginner at replays ^^
Thanks for the critiques

Your welcome.

i have two head decaps to show

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Replays removed. See Rule 3.

This is not your thread to post into... u must have permission asshole.

godslayer, this is not the thread, if you wan't to show your replays, create your own.
Reported and also these decaps are noobish