So, you drew few funny lines and added a photoshop filter over it? How awesome is that? 12/10 for you my friend.
Nose seems to be pointing the wrong direction. And his head is massive. And eyes seem to be really feminine *Cough*
Take a look at this *Cough*
Jaw line is funky. Not smooth at all.
That's about it. To sum it up, it was a good try, but the outcome isn't quite good.