First one:

Quick CnC:

I like the start. It was pretty fluid.

Your hits weren't very destructive though I think that was the point.

The random pauses annoy me and make it hard to like.

The transition to the pose was nice.

yeah i need alot of work on DMS but when it comes to being fluid, i have no problems cause of sparring

The opener was alright-ish. The hits weren't really that good in my opinion. The first one was pretty eh. The second was alright. Try aiming for the center of joints pecs/glutes ETC. Or you could just do a madman destroying everybodypart uke has. Try to focus on style whilst focusing on destruction at the same time.
(4-10). CnC my thread?

yeah my problem is the destruction, i can get the style down

wip:

WIP 5:

I don't like where the WIP is going.
Movement is slow
Lost balance at the end.

2/10

Piece by Piece:
Again. Slow.
Atleast you have balance
Grabbing to dm, not nice
Dem pauses
Quick transition to pose (It's a good thing)
3/10

Overall: Move faster, Dm more and DON'T GRAB TO DM!

Actually, grab dms are fine as long as you hide them well.