Toribash
Original Post
No Patience for sp
Hey guys thought i try some stuff.

Peace

Chaz
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Chazer - Head ball 1.rpl (385.6 KB, 51 views)
You're overextending your legs quite a lot to the point of where it looks unpleasant, but you do understand the basic concepts of movement.

Your understanding of flow might need a little more work, as the replay looks uneven in places such as frame 525.

I'd suggest not grabbing around the initial headkick, as you could have pulled off something way more fancy.

When you did the juggling it did look alright, but there are still many flaws which can be fixed by simply smoothing everything out.