Well, I'm not exactly a mastermind at cncing, but, I know how hard it is to get commented on when you're not too well known in this section of the forum so:
quite jerky with weird flow, seems too much hold is going on. The hit was quite nice and well balanced so thats coolio. nice posture and stuff, but, one other thing: uke basically fell over before you even touched him, so it seems a little cheap, but, still, it's a niceish replay. congrats.