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[music] i thought ft. anni
made with free loops (lol) besides the vocals.
software used; free loops provided by magix, edited with audacity.

https://soundcloud.com/ojyrii/i-thought-ft-anni
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Listened to it!

It wasn't really my style, but I wouldn't say it was bad. I think that the lyrics could have used some diversity, and the drum loop was a little repetitive. Also, the lyrics seemed to end too abruptly closer to the end. Not bad :3
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i absolutely dig this
wonderful chillin chords
while lyrically not the best, i enjoy it's repetitiveness
lots of soul in the vocals

as skywhale said though, a bit too much repetition
some drum variations/fills could've give more colour into the song
also vocals might need more effects, even simple effects like delays/reverbs so it sounds less "dry"

only other flaw i notice is that it's too short ):
8.5/10
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Originally Posted by jokerstein View Post
i absolutely dig this
wonderful chillin chords
while lyrically not the best, i enjoy it's repetitiveness
lots of soul in the vocals

as skywhale said though, a bit too much repetition
some drum variations/fills could've give more colour into the song
also vocals might need more effects, even simple effects like delays/reverbs so it sounds less "dry"

only other flaw i notice is that it's too short ):
8.5/10

Thank you for the feedback! I appreciate it and I'm glad you liked it haha.
Originally Posted by Nearly View Post
how much did you edit the loops?

Well, I made the chords for the loops I used (except drums and vocals of course) and added little reverb to some of them.
Originally Posted by LagSwitch View Post
Not enough for the tempos to match.

Shhh.
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