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[vid] Morte Et Dabo


had a fun time doing this

Replays by Pusga and Vayne

Program: After effects CC 14

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Originally Posted by TyZi View Post
wow. you improved so much from when you started.

On the topic of this,
If anyone wants to see how I progressed, here's a little time stamp. (cuz im ego hungry)

time stamps

Last edited by Nagato; Jan 23, 2016 at 01:12 AM.
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Nice vid man, I highly appreciate what you did.
The effects....everything. The thing that is bugging me is the music. Try choosing a different genre.
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I'm going to have to agree on that, the music just doesn't do it for me.

Throwing my personal music taste aside here is what I have to say. You picked a bad part of the song to start it at, the moment I started that video I felt uncomfortable and not entertained at all. You should trying starting the music at a low volume and slowing increasing it for the opening bit to make it flow smoothly or start the beginning of the video with the beginning of the song.

Besides the music I felt it was way to dark, don't put a dark Tori on a Dark background, it makes the viewer strain to see whats going on instead of just enjoying the video.

Effects wise from what I could see you did a pretty good job and the key frames were okay.

Also dude you should take a note from other editors and add something to the start besides just a black void. Put up your own emblem to represent yourself and have it fade to black or something from that. Don't just start with black, really pull in your viewer from the moment the video starts. Smooth Transitions and branding are everything.
Last edited by Kohta; Jan 22, 2016 at 11:45 PM.
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Originally Posted by quantumroxas View Post
Nice vid man, I highly appreciate what you did.
The effects....everything. The thing that is bugging me is the music. Try choosing a different genre.

I use the music I like
Originally Posted by K0HTA View Post
I'm going to have to agree on that, the music just doesn't do it for me.

Throwing my personal music taste aside here is what I have to say. You picked a bad part of the song to start it at, the moment I started that video I felt uncomfortable and not entertained at all. You should trying starting the music at a low volume and slowing increasing it for the opening bit to make it flow smoothly or start the beginning of the video with the beginning of the song.

Besides the music I felt it was way to dark, don't put a dark Tori on a Dark background, it makes the viewer strain to see whats going on instead of just enjoying the video.

Effects wise from what I could see you did a pretty good job and the key frames were okay.

Also dude you should take a note from other editors and add something to the start besides just a black void. Put up your own emblem to represent yourself and have it fade to black or something from that. Don't just start with black, really pull in your viewer from the moment the video starts. Smooth Transitions and branding are everything.

Ditto.

Fair enough on the dark tori thing. Just thought it matches the mood.

If I had a logo, I would use it. But I don't. I was thinking of adding text but you know.
And when you said about taking note about other editors, I used a dark tori on a dark background like Habu.
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Ehhh I don't really like Habu too much though, but thats mostly because of the music choices he uses I think.

As for the background it doesn't have to be black to set a dark mood. you can use shades of Grey or just dark colors in general as well.

Also if you have some TC to spare you could just throw up a request in the art/texture forum for someone to make you one. I don't think
they would ask you to much for something simple like a logo.
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wow. you improved so much from when you started. music is right up my alley, and you used it well, doesn't really matter if anyone likes it.

only things that really bugged me was the hunter force that really put off the rest of the tori for me, and the screenpumps that were too slow for how intense they were
Originally Posted by Kaneki333 View Post
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Eh I thought the screen pumps were well within acceptable range. I really liked them to be honest.
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Originally Posted by K0HTA View Post
Ehhh I don't really like Habu too much though, but thats mostly because of the music choices he uses I think.

As for the background it doesn't have to be black to set a dark mood. you can use shades of Grey or just dark colors in general as well.

Also if you have some TC to spare you could just throw up a request in the art/texture forum for someone to make you one. I don't think
they would ask you to much for something simple like a logo.

I should do that, I guess
Originally Posted by TyZi View Post
wow. you improved so much from when you started. music is right up my alley, and you used it well, doesn't really matter if anyone likes it.

only things that really bugged me was the hunter force that really put off the rest of the tori for me, and the screenpumps that were too slow for how intense they were

the green guys mastertech

but im guessing u didnt know that cuz ur the fake tyzi. come on. no swearing. pls. bring him outta the basement.
Originally Posted by K0HTA View Post
Eh I thought the screen pumps were well within acceptable range. I really liked them to be honest.

I guess the first screenpump coulda been better but yeh.
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Whats wrong with the music? I thought it went pretty well with the video. The timing on the music for the hits were good. Still not sure why people don't like the music. I do .
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I never said anything about the hit timing with the music, my complaint was that the music started too intrusively at the beginning of the video. I would have like it to start soft and intensify as the action started up and not just begin in my face from the get go.
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