ok so ill just go ahead and give a general cnc on all of your replays, now all together,
your movement was stiff which is ok since you are just starting out at replay making.
try making all your moves meld together instead of making every move separate,
this keeps flow to the replay and makes it very easy and attractive to watch.
A good way to practice this is turn on a higher gravity so you can keep close to the ground,
something around -23 or -16 whichever you feel most comfortable with, and just practice openers and keeping rotation.
thats about all i got for now, keep it the work man you got a long road ahead of you