My first head texture in a while, so yeah, I am pretty rusty. This was made in 512x512 obviously. What do you think?

i think its ok.

the question is:
what do YOU think?
we can all say whats wrong, but thats just boring...
what can you improve and how would you do it?

I'm trying to figure out how I can make the teeth pop out. It looks awfully flat right now. I'm also planning to add something to the forehead, as it looks empty there. The eyebrow also looks a bit too thick for me.

Try removing everything but the eyes and teeth, see what it looks like then.

Here it is with just eyes and teeth.

lol looks funneh.

This should help you getting the teeth shading right;
Here is an example texture I made to demonstrate!


And for your enjoyment, here is also a normal map that could help you if you want to look more carefully.

Hopefully that should help you see how the shading should be to get the 3D teeth kind of look ;)