you've gotten much better from the first time I met you and saw your work, Veoo.
I, like the others, don't like the way the pupil's halves are misaligned, but I get what you were going for, it's like the eye was cut in half and is being held/stitched together. if you want to keep going for that, I think you should add something to distinguish the fact that it was cut in half and is being held together, like add the stitching on the actual eye, maybe put some blood where the slice is.
your technical skill has improved greatly, I'm happy to see that, hope you continue to improve and take people's comments and criticism into account